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2011/02/21

Need a serious chorus for this Metal song.........?

this is what i have so far:



As you watch it burn,
Wondering if they will ever learn.
They say “Don’t worry, It will be fine.”
All they do is lie, those foul, voracious swine.
They slaughter and they slay,
We fight to live another day.


I would like it to be serious and no answers like A song doesnt need a chorus. also i would like some advice on how to make it better.

Best Answer - Chosen by Voters:
Kill and die
There is thunder in the sky
Our lives is filled with war
And if you think that we wont win this fight
Please know that the power of true metal kills them all!

Other Answers:
Do you have music ready for what you already have?|||this genre sucks it sucks it really really sucks

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